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sotcfan2004

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« on: July 21, 2004, 11:09:10 AM »
Well, for the past six months, I have been brainstorming about a new game show.  I doubt I'll ever get it to air. I have yet to name it.  Anyways, here's the skinny.

The show starts with five players.  A board with 50 spaces is revealed.  Each space contains a question worth between 1-5 points, or bonus spaces, which I will explain in a minute.

A clock is set at 3 minutes.  The first player (determined by drawing numbers) picks the first square, and at that moment the clock begins counting downward.  The point value is announced and the question is asked.  Players will then have 3 seconds to buzz in.  The first player to buzz in with the correct answer earns the points and control of the board.  A wrong answer incurs a score deduction equal to the value of the question.  Only the first player to buzz in may attempt to answer.  In round 1, there are 3 bonus spaces:
-DOUBLE PLAY:  When revealed, a question is asked.  First to buzz in with the correct answer earns the opportunity to answer a second question.  If they answer it correctly, their score is doubled.  If either question is answered incorrectly there is no scoring penalty but the DP will be out of play.
-TAKE 5:  A question is asked.  First to buzz in with the correct answer takes 5 points from each of the opponents and adds to his/her score.  A wrong answer incurs a 5-point scoring deduction.
-CA$H or CREDIT:  A question is asked.  First to buzz in with the correct answer will have the choice of $1,000 in guaranteed cash or 10 pts.  This would be the only guaranteed cash of the game, as you will see in a minute.
At the end of 3 minutes, the lowest scoring player is eliminated.  If necessary, a tiebreaker question would be asked.
Round 2 point values range between 5-10.  The bonus spaces are as follows:
1 DOUBLE PLAY
2 TAKE 10s (same as TAKE 5, but 10 instead)
In this round, there is also a penalty space hidden on the board with no question attached.  It is called the 'SILENCER.'  Whoever reveals this space will be locked out of the game for 30 seconds.
Round 3 is the last round of regular play.  If there is a returning champion, the two lowest scoring players are eliminated; otherwise, same as before.  Points range between 10-15.  The special spaces include:
2 DOUBLE PLAYS
2 TAKE 10s
2 TAKE 5s
1 SILENCER
MARATHON-  Whoever reveals this space will have exclusive control of the board until they answer incorrectly, take more than 3 seconds to answer, or time expires.
Whoever is in the lead at the end of this round will go on to face the returning champion (if there is no champion, the two highest scorers will face each other in the final round).
FINAL ROUND
Same board of 50 questions.  This time, the champ and challenger will tackle the same board separately.  They will only have 90 seconds to amass as many points as possible.  While the first player plays, the second is in isolation.  The champ decides who goes first.  The only bonus space in this round is a question worth 25 points.  After both have faced the board, the player who racks up the most points becomes champion and earns a tough decision.

After winning their first game, the champ receives $25,000.  They may take the money and leave, or give it back and return the next day to face off against the winner of round 3.  A second win nets $50,000 and the same decision.  A third win is worth $75,000, a fourth is worth $100,000.  Any player who wins five games wins $1,000,000.  Question is: would they be confident enough in their abilities to take the risk?  Because, if they lose, they leave empty-handed. (except for money earned in CA$H or CREDIT)

Well, that's about it.  Let me know what you think.

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« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2004, 12:14:35 PM »
No play-along factor at all, aside from answering straight quiz questions, and you don't even have any kind of interesting gimmick for those. In fact, I don't see an interesting overall theme for this thing whatsoever.

There is nothing here that grabs my attention or makes me interested in watching this show at all.
« Last Edit: July 21, 2004, 12:14:57 PM by clemon79 »
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« Reply #2 on: July 21, 2004, 01:07:15 PM »
I think that there are too many extras in your game. I think it would be a good idea to have the winner be the person who has control of the board when time expires.
« Last Edit: July 21, 2004, 01:07:41 PM by STYDfan »

sotcfan2004

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« Reply #3 on: July 21, 2004, 01:19:32 PM »
[quote name=\'clemon79\' date=\'Jul 21 2004, 11:14 AM\'] No play-along factor at all, aside from answering straight quiz questions, and you don't even have any kind of interesting gimmick for those. In fact, I don't see an interesting overall theme for this thing whatsoever.

There is nothing here that grabs my attention or makes me interested in watching this show at all. [/quote]
 My question to you is this:  why does there always have to be a 'gimmick?'  The whole premise of the show is that your winnings are not only determined by your correct answers but also by the risks you're willing to take.  And, if you're really hungry for gimmicks, the bonus spaces are excellent examples, as they can alter the course of the game in an instant. A Double Play can give a struggling player a boost into the lead, as can a Take 5 or Take 10.  CA$H or CREDIT provides an interesting dilemma:  should you take the only guaranteed money in the game, or pad your score?  A Silencer could stop a great player's streak dead in its tracks, thus giving the opponents an opportunity to move past him/her.  The Marathon space has its pro-  allows a player to come from behind without having to be the first to buzz in, and con- could result in a completely lopsided game.

This would not be the first show to come out that would be a pure test of knowledge (gee, remember Jeopardy!).  The only thing about J! that troubles me is that it is not your everyday, average Joe that goes on there.  You've got your professors, doctors, teachers, genius software engineers, but what about the little guy?  There are an inproportionate number of Joe Schmoes out there filled to the brim with useless trivia.  Why not give them an opportunity to capitalize?

And, as for you, clemon79, I've been posting on this board for a few months now, and you always seem to come around to say something negative about my posts.  You must lead a very unhappy life.

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« Reply #4 on: July 21, 2004, 01:25:00 PM »
[quote name=\'sotcfan2004\' date=\'Jul 21 2004, 12:19 PM\']My question to you is this:  why does there always have to be a 'gimmick?' [/quote]
If there is nothing to hook the viewer, he won't be interested.
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And, as for you, clemon79, I've been posting on this board for a few months now, and you always seem to come around to say something negative about my posts. You must lead a very unhappy life.
While not wanting to speak for Chris; you; Sir; asked for feedack on your proposal. Chris gave you feedback...just because you don't like what he said doesn't make him a negative person.
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« Reply #5 on: July 21, 2004, 03:13:49 PM »
[quote name=\'sotcfan2004\' date=\'Jul 21 2004, 11:19 AM\']This would not be the first show to come out that would be a pure test of knowledge (gee, remember Jeopardy!).  The only thing about J! that troubles me is that it is not your everyday, average Joe that goes on there.  You've got your professors, doctors, teachers, genius software engineers, but what about the little guy?  There are an inproportionate number of Joe Schmoes out there filled to the brim with useless trivia.  Why not give them an opportunity to capitalize?

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Maybe it's changed, but I don't remember occupation ever being a screening criteria for Jeopardy!  What was important was that you had fast recall for facts and even for, as you call it, useless trivia.
Call it a "gimmick," call it a "hook," whatever...the previous posters' points are valid.  There's no hook here that would interest a viewer, no overall concept that can be succinctly stated, and way too many "special squares."

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« Reply #6 on: July 21, 2004, 03:29:48 PM »
[quote name=\'sotcfan2004\' date=\'Jul 21 2004, 12:19 PM\']
My question to you is this:  why does there always have to be a 'gimmick? [/quote]
 Television was built on gimmicks. Sad but true. Every show pitch...games, sci-fi, talk shows...has a gimmick.

Your show has a gimmick...risk money to win big money, while staying ahead of opponents scores in a game with A LOT of pitfalls....

The question you have to ask yourself is : Is this gimmick worth watching? I don't think the answer is yes, but with a lot of fine tuning, I don't think the answer would be 'no' either.

Advice? Apply the KISS theory. Don't make the viewer go into sensory overload trying to keep up with the game!
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« Reply #7 on: July 21, 2004, 03:36:15 PM »
Wasn't there a rule against posting original game ideas on the Forum?

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« Reply #8 on: July 21, 2004, 03:49:25 PM »
[quote name=\'mystery7\' date=\'Jul 21 2004, 02:36 PM\'] Wasn't there a rule against posting original game ideas on the Forum? [/quote]
 Taking a couple of quick scans of the Eligibility Requirements, I didn't see anything prohibiting posting game show proposals.

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« Reply #9 on: July 21, 2004, 03:55:41 PM »
[quote name=\'sotcfan2004\' date=\'Jul 21 2004, 10:19 AM\'] And, as for you, clemon79, I've been posting on this board for a few months now, and you always seem to come around to say something negative about my posts.  You must lead a very unhappy life. [/quote]
Oh, good Christ, how did I know this was coming.

You ASKED what we thought. If you didn't want the truth, then instead of posting:
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Let me know what you think.
...you should have said "Please post and tell me how good this is, because I might go whining like a little snot if you have something bad to say about it."
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This would not be the first show to come out that would be a pure test of knowledge (gee, remember Jeopardy!).
Jeopardy has possibly the two greatest gimmicks in the business: the answer/question format, and the concept of losing money for an incorrect answer. Take those both away, and it's crap, too. You have the second in your game, but now that it's been done, it's not original. And THEN you throw in rules like your Double Play that ask a question in play but DON'T penalize opponents for a wrong answer. (I realize SOTC did that on the Fame Game, but they also went to great lengths to present the FG as a seperate segment of the show outside of the regular questions.)

Have you playtested this at all? Is it a balanced format? I bet no, on both counts.
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The whole premise of the show is that your winnings are not only determined by your correct answers but also by the risks you're willing to take.
And you reward neither by giving the high scorer at the end of the day $25 large, period, regardless of score. So it ONLY matters that the champion answer more questions than their opponents, not HOW many, and it doesn't even really matter there if they get lucky and hit the right squares. Also, the only people who are going to take your grand in-play are the ones so far behind that they have no chance of winning and would like to take home something along with their Turtle Wax. Anyone in the running is gonna take the 10 points. If they haven't fallen asleep at their podium in boredom yet. So much for your "interesting" dillemma.

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« Reply #10 on: July 21, 2004, 03:55:43 PM »
This sounds like nothing more than a form of Jeopardy with too many additions.  If you want a game that will last longer and work out, it needs to have a concept rarely done in games before.  It could be an all new gimmick, or an all new form of questions, just something completely original will always help.

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« Reply #11 on: July 21, 2004, 03:58:40 PM »
[quote name=\'SRIV94\' date=\'Jul 21 2004, 12:49 PM\'] [quote name=\'mystery7\' date=\'Jul 21 2004, 02:36 PM\'] Wasn't there a rule against posting original game ideas on the Forum? [/quote]
Taking a couple of quick scans of the Eligibility Requirements, I didn't see anything prohibiting posting game show proposals.
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 There's nothing against it, but it's discouraged, both for potential theft of idea legal issues and the fact that the proposer usually gets their panties in a wad when they post a garbage idea and people tell them so.
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« Reply #12 on: July 21, 2004, 04:24:28 PM »
[quote name=\'clemon79\' date=\'Jul 21 2004, 02:58 PM\'] [quote name=\'SRIV94\' date=\'Jul 21 2004, 12:49 PM\'] [quote name=\'mystery7\' date=\'Jul 21 2004, 02:36 PM\'] Wasn't there a rule against posting original game ideas on the Forum? [/quote]
Taking a couple of quick scans of the Eligibility Requirements, I didn't see anything prohibiting posting game show proposals.
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There's nothing against it, but it's discouraged, both for potential theft of idea legal issues and the fact that the proposer usually gets their panties in a wad when they post a garbage idea and people tell them so. [/quote]
 Ah, yes, just like the old Usenet days (I guess some of those FAQ still apply).

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« Reply #13 on: July 21, 2004, 04:49:38 PM »
Without stiring the shit more than it is now on this topic...I did read the idea and not claiming to be an expert in creating games, but I have been involved in the development process...this is not the type of game that would sell today. Maybe 30 years ago you could get away with something like this...but not today.

Its sad but yes, everything needs a gimmick or a hook.  Take out the concept of the host playing for his money in Win Ben Stein's Money and all it is is a game show with categories and questions...Take the grossness out of Fear Factor and it's like every other "stunt" show that's been done before.

Plus your bonus money would not appeal to a production companys pocket book Im afraid.  I think they would frown on a player being able to walk away with $1,000,000 for simply winning 5 days in a row...just ask the Jeopardy people, the ones who still have hair on their head! ;)

But keep at it...Combination Lock has been around, in its NAME form, for 12 years now...I've pitched the current format for the past 5 years and now. all of sudden, people think it's the greatest thing since sliced bread.  I look back and read how it all started and I shutter at what I thought was a "finished" game.  So keep at it!!

Hope that helped a little!

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« Reply #14 on: July 21, 2004, 04:57:00 PM »
Constructive criticism's a thing o' wonder, ain't it? Here's a little more. No negative thoughts intended or implied.

Is the host going to explain how the bonus squares work before the game starts? If not, and the clock is running continuously for 3 minutes, that's gonna amount to a lot of time being taken away from the play of the game itself. Also, even a simple thing like asking, "Cash or credit?" can adversely affect the flow of an otherwise rapid-fire Q&A spree.

I agree with Chris that the Double Play should not only giveth, it should also taketh away. The penalty for an incorrect response should be something - maybe twice the value of the question?

$25 large isn't so large for a jackpot in an era when people who win $32K on Millionaire are regarded as losers. I think $100K steps would be a little more appropriate on the way to a million.

I don't mean to sound like I'm focusing solely on what's wrong with the game - just wanted to share observations. Constructively.

BTW, here's a link to the discouragement of new concepts. See the last post.